Thursday, August 30, 2007

Why Don't We Complain

A little girl pouting because she doesn't get what she wants; a soccer player who stops running because it's too hard; or a customer at the store saying that her strawberries are no good are all ways to complain. But, when someone has something legitimate to complain about, it gets pushed aside when it really should be said. That's what I learned from William F. Buckley Jr., in Why Don't We Complain.

When looking at the writing style of William F. Buckley Jr., I find that he uses imagery all throughout his writing. He uses words to paint a picture in your mind; a picture that will help you understand his point of view. Like, when he is describing the situation on the train, where it's 85 degrees and no one musters the confidence to complain about their suffering, he includes every detail about all aspects of the situation. Such as the setting, obviously; and the characters, like the conductor who walks through eighty sweaty men and doesn't realize that anything is wrong. He also includes the overwhelmingly bad mood that everyone must be in. His writing gives you the total ability to see where he's coming from and where he draws inspiration.

One of Buckley's explanations as to why people don't complain is this: "the observable reluctance of the majority of Americans to assert themselves in minor matters related to our increased sense of helplessness in an age of technology and centralized political power." In essence, this quote means that people are surrendering their voice and opinion to the politic and technology of our technological society. This statement is one of the strongest metaphors in this essay, but it also seems to directly correlate withe the book we just read, Amusing Ourselves to Death. I found it very interesting that Buckley would make a point like this in amongst the scenarios he used to persuade the reader.

The author of this essay frequently uses his opinions and experiences to explain the reasons we don't complain. Whether it is his out of focus movies, or ironic opinions. One ironic statement he made is that "I myself can occasionally summon the courage to complain, but I cannot, as I have intimated, complain softly." This statement is ironic because he starts out needing all this courage to complain at all, but when he does complain, he's loud and outgoing. Personally, I think ironic statements make the writing stronger because the reader has to think more to understand the message.

Overall, this essay by William F. Buckley Jr. taught me that people don't say what they really feel because they don't want to complain. But, those reservations cause the people who really need to be heard to not be heard at all. And when we don't say what we really feel, how will we be heard? We wont be.

9 comments:

Kelsey Svaren said...

I haven't read this essay, but they way that you describe it makes me want to take the time to read it. I like that you found a way to connect this essay to Neil Postman's book, it shows your observance!

Nicole said...

Great analysis. I haven't read this essay, but now I want to. The only thing you could have added would be a few more examples of rhetorical devices, and maybe a little about the author's tone.

Skye Olson said...

Carolyn~
I loved the connection you made to Amusing Ourselves to Death. Both authors realize that a lot of people feel they don't have the power to make a change in the world. I completely agree with you about Buckley's use of irony throughout the essay. The whole thing seems to be very ironic; I mean he is complaining about how people don't complain. Anyway, I liked your analysis a lot, especially the way you focused on some of the less common rhetorical devices, such as irony. You really seemed to capture the author's style and message.

Chasina said...

I agree with Kelsey and Nicole, after reading your post I am interested in the essay. Your use of quotes was wonderful, saying how they strengthened the essay. I also liked how you explained the author's use of imagery.

Connorj said...

Like others have said, good job on the connection between Postman's book and the essay. Also, I enjoyed the way in which you'd sum each paragraph up with your own thoughts. Although I disagree with the essay in question with regards to myself, I'll probably read it because of its cultural relevance. Thanks for the introduction to the book.

Gabe said...

I liked your essay. I liked how you took apart the examples and explained each piece of them to show how the author worte the essay to show how he felt. I enjoyed reading your essay and I liked to see what you got out of it. The only thing I wish is for a little more Carloyn instead of just analysis.

Hattie said...

Carolyn,
I liek how you talked about imagery. I also like how you tied in examples he used in the book to further explain why you thought his writing was good. The way you tied in Postman's book was also really cool!Great job!

ashapiro said...

I too chose to write about “Why Don’t We Complain,” yet look how different our posts are. Rather than becoming the boring rhetorical analysis that most have turned out to be, yous voice remained strong throughout the entire essay. Starting with the variety of complaining situations in your introduction, you continued to give examples of every poit you made. This made it extremely easy to follow along without too many confusing terms or definitions. It let me look at the same piece of writing from a different point of view. This was a pleasure to read…

Dan Shepler said...

"The observable reluctance of the majority of Americans to assert themselves in minor matters related to our increased sense of helplessness in an age of technology and centralized political power."
Yes, I also thought that that was the main metaphor for the story, but I don't think it has a direct correlation with Amusing Ourselves to Death. AOTD dealt with the fact that television has made America complacent and constantly requiring entertainment, I thought that Why Don't We Complain? derisive of the complacency of American's in general in a time where there were only 310 tv sets for every 1,000 people (http://unesdoc.unesco.org/images/0003/000337/033739eo.pdf p. 77), compared to the 790 per 1,000 in 1983 (http://unesdoc.unesco.org/images/0007/000749/074953eb.pdf p. 77)(two years before Postman's book).