tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5270580361314886328.post4369112733789697221..comments2023-10-28T08:01:12.479-07:00Comments on B-E Advanced Placement Language 2007: Let The Shoes Burnjklassenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07810324793403821466noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5270580361314886328.post-16511419255511533002007-12-13T19:16:00.000-08:002007-12-13T19:16:00.000-08:00You are the first person to publicly voice your di...You are the first person to publicly voice your disprovable of the hallway conditions and i applauded you. Using humor to bring to light this frustrating issue could really help to solve it. Everyone els has said it but i will say it again, the last sentence is very nice.Brandon Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12412364404179054979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5270580361314886328.post-55118727364052223402007-12-09T14:18:00.000-08:002007-12-09T14:18:00.000-08:00Excellent job Shapiro! Your tone was very effecti...Excellent job Shapiro! Your tone was very effective. I don't know if this was intentional, but the way you categorized "Slow Pokes" could be translated into the identification of cliques. I really loved the line, "let righteousness be heard or let shoes burn." Also, your organization made it seem even more logical-brava.michellekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000208459787466080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5270580361314886328.post-51486609865260545482007-12-06T19:28:00.000-08:002007-12-06T19:28:00.000-08:00I love how you had humor tied in with the seriousn...I love how you had humor tied in with the seriousness of the situation. You made a good point about the penalty of three tardies at our school to support your purpose. I think we can all relate to your perspective of dodging the slow pokes and texters. My favorite sentnece was the very last one about the smell of burning shoes and justice.Callie R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03820125648706566536noreply@blogger.com